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"Lord of the crazy"Madman replay.Rate 1-10!
Here it is,And please tell me things I need to work on.Such as fluency,or making it faster or something like that if you don't find anything wrong just rate.Please rate from 1-10!
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I know it was slow.But stiff?through that whole replay the only joints that weren't relaxed were the ones that were doing something(like contracting and stuff like that)
look at your apendages, they were pretty much just extended alot.it was relaxed in the beggining. it was sloppy also because your body was rubbing against uke alot. again i say about a 4.5 or 5 beacause of those variables. next time dont forget to relax mid-attack and to add speed and style. its good uve got destruction, but it lacked flow too.
keep it up and always learn from comments.
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