Contrast maybe?Don't know.
Anyway,I love it and can't find any flaws in it.9/10,I just think it lacks something but don't know what it is,the text isn't really appealing.
Keep up the good work.
you messed up with the text placement and font. use an original font, like times new roman or something, maybe Arial and put it and inch to the left of the blue thing on his head. make the font white with about 70-80% opacity and see how it looks.
I see dont want to much contrast might actually edit the text i can see where u guys are coming from. Seems kinda... out of place? Ill edit it and u guys can have a peek at my sig.
I didn't like the font, I think that you should remove it. The focal is good, it just needs more lightning, and you could get that just with darkness (on the sides), as skura said.