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[IMG] Death in the Mist
Took me an hour to make it i hope you like it

500X500
I Think i can do better please Comment your thoughts about it
Last edited by LordReaper; Jul 13, 2010 at 03:27 AM.
The glow around the reaper doesn't fit. Raise the opacity on it or apply a heavy gaussian blur or something to feather it out. I like the outline though, very nice. Maybe add some more outlines of a background graveyard or something like that. The text is bad in the pic as well.
Originally Posted by LWafflez View Post
The glow around the reaper doesn't fit. Raise the opacity on it or apply a heavy gaussian blur or something to feather it out. I like the outline though, very nice. Maybe add some more outlines of a background graveyard or something like that. The text is bad in the pic as well.

i agree althow the out line was more ment to be show of aura il see if i edit it more

Edit:i really suck at making a mist effect >.> any one wanna help me on it?
I think the second edit is better, that color blue on the first one doesnt look much like death in my opinion. The only two things are the scythe has that little white circle, if its supposed to be a hole in the scythe, it doesnt look natural. Secondly, you cant see the Lord Reaper text much. Looks more like Ord Deaner at the moment. Maybe try to make the text stand out a bit more.

Generally, I like it, just fix those small flaws and it will look better.
second edit is much better, i like this a lot. Text definitely needs to stand out more, and also i'd even try a different font to match the horror kind of feel. Also what Eckz said about the circle in the scythe, it needs to be smoothed a bit. I think the top left looks way too empty, definitely add some more objects and i think a little red would go nicely (like blood or something)

in general it's really nice, but too much empty space for my liking. keep it up =] 6/10 so far
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There really isn't much to it. It's a grim reaper cropped with a grundge background.

The text doesnt really fit at all and nothing in the pic has any flow. No detail. It needs stuff in it, tombstones, trees, etc.