You dislike this too?
Drawn with mouse
Gimp..

very messy looks like ms paint,also why on a yellow background?
and no nose
3/10

Looks great, but work on eyes. they look weird

I want to see you do better with your mouse.

Ty 931bw :3
i try to draw better eyes..

picket123:
yes, its hard to draw with mouse but i get my tablet at the 16th march ^^

Okay.
The eyes are too close together, and too small for a chibi. Too much hair towards the bottom,
nothing in the mouth at all.
You might want to also make the body more than a rectangle.

Okay I guess, very basic.

this is just a sketch, drawn in max. 5 mins, so.. i know that it doesnt looks great but i like it ;p

tis ok.
5/10

Needs alittle cleanup

Needs more effort.
Not really worth posting here if you only spent five minutes on it.