I don't like to criticize people for mimicking a style that they like, but I do think you're borrowing from macperfect for the wrong reasons. You're doing it because you view him as a more experienced artist whose style has brought positive feedback to him, and therefore you'd like to borrow that success too. I think you should borrow styles that you think work for you and fit your ideal style, so that you not only feel more original, but your work usually ends up more unique and stylish.
As far as the video itself, I have the same criticism for you as I have had with macperfect - the effects are a bit overdone/out of place, the focus should be on the execution of the toris rather than the effects surrounding them. Obviously these took more time, style, and effort than your run-of-the-mill video, but they still need some touching up.
I like the little impact waves you had appearing around the joints, but I think they could have worked better with a smoother beat and less cutting back. They seem to me like a very serene effect tied with a song and other effects that are very abrupt, which I'm not too fond of.
Overall, still decent - could've been longer, but what you had was good.
7.5/10