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[Art] Dragon
I've just started drawing dragon and wanted to hear some comments about it
Now I don't really like it, I want to add something to face or make this dragon Ice or Fire....
I am too lazy so I don't really promise that I will complete it.
Also I am new in this forum/game and I saw that u like art right here so c&c plz

new update
Last edited by Strase; Jan 14, 2012 at 06:19 PM.
Wings doesn't seem to be attached to the dragon (perspective error)
Jalis: Freelancer, you're a duck | Sachi: Freelancer, you're a duck | Reanimator: Freelancer, you're a duck
satiknee: Freelancer, you're a duck | Wiggi: Freelancer, you're a duck | Tarlan: Freelancer, you're a duck
The head looks good, but the wings are too far up on the back. The wings' shapes aren't correct either. Dragon wings like that should be pretty similar to bat wings.

Like these:



but larger and longer.
I like the fact that you are schooling him about what the wing of a mythical creature is supposed to look like Ofc the proportions are wrong if you are trying to make a symmetric dragon. And yes it still looks pretty bad, remember that you are drawing from a perspective and that it looks like the right wing (for him) is sticking out of his stomach because you are not thinking about the fact that his whole body is aimed towards the left side of the paper, so therefore his back (where the wings usually are drawn is more aimed to the right side of the paper.

so realistically in this situation the head will almost be hiding the right wing.

Try to think in 3d not 2d
Last edited by Ezeth; Jan 14, 2012 at 02:31 AM.


Not much are matching on the perspective. . .
Jalis: Freelancer, you're a duck | Sachi: Freelancer, you're a duck | Reanimator: Freelancer, you're a duck
satiknee: Freelancer, you're a duck | Wiggi: Freelancer, you're a duck | Tarlan: Freelancer, you're a duck
Can't find the way how to change this f**king mistake
Aghhr....
Last edited by Strase; Jan 14, 2012 at 06:34 PM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump