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[Art] Cartoon Me
Now, this is my first ever art I posted, just saying (In case that you think it really sucks)

Program used: Paint.NET
CnC at the harshest, and tnx in advance.
Last edited by machker94; Mar 1, 2012 at 11:50 PM.
~I make videos and stuff~
x_O
Just for an FYI guys, it's not his first art ever, I've got some proofs about that, not going to make them public though.

Anyways, the grey shadow thingy or whatever is that supposed to be doesn't look right, and couldn't you waste 20 minutes more and make a suitable background, not that piece of shit, it hurts my goddamn eyes.
I play games and lift weights.
I wish kungfujc was still around. BenDover or someone similar should be able to provide you with a reference on body proportioning. Compared to the body though the face leaves a lot desired. IS there a picture you used as a reference? The left upper arm seems awefully short.
Last edited by TomPaine; Mar 1, 2012 at 11:55 PM.
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@Humper "Art" not vid : L . But tnx for the Cs
@TomPaine Yes but not on the pc. Its from the crouch point of view from my left if that helps.
And for the face, I'm not really great with facial expressions.
@Felepeno Sorry, the aim for me wasn't really the background so it was just slapped on.
Last edited by machker94; Mar 2, 2012 at 12:30 AM.
~I make videos and stuff~
x_O
-Um, bad facial expressions
-Bad shading
-More detail on pants
-Nice shirt wrinkles and details
-Try to get a background that helps
'i.e' , clouds on a light blue, or something light.
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