Toribash
Original Post
It's been liek.. 6 months :3
D-Nada meh plumb.rpl



First replay in a while, i am WAY rusty. It is only a Decapitation. Enjoi
Last edited by Termic6; Sep 2, 2012 at 12:10 AM.
Welcome back, I've missed you.
Remember me?
Guess what, when you left, I was in blue belt, guess what belt Im in now. Blue. Yay.

Replay looked pretty good.
Generic opener...
Mini-manip was pretty cool.
The way you decaped him could've been improved.
Pose was abit twitchy but ok.

Since you've been away for so long, this is really good.
Good job.
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The replay was pretty nice in general.
I liked how you lifted Uke, it reminded me of Bisonic's "Carousel" somehow.
The push to the ground was pretty neat, but ground impacts are usually a bit bland.
The pose was pretty nice, but you twitched a bit to keep balance.
oh yeah
The opener was alright, nothing too special.
The core hit was pretty nice, but it lacked some knee-ankle coordination.
The chest hit could have been a good boomhit, you just had to edit it some more.
oh yeah
Pretty good.

Flaws:
Opener, generic... Kinda.
As pusga said, the third Dm could've been a great boomhit with some more time spent on it.
You ghosted with your arm in opener.
Pose wouldn't hold if you added a few more frames.

Everything that I didn't mention was awesome. Especially the core.




*Requesting CnC.
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