What do you think? Cnc welcome!

Signature is broken.

Fixed :>

you used my number one pet peeve, which is using the same render in the avatar and the signature

especially since you mirrored it


and i know it's haaaard to find two matching renders bla bla bla but still

So, I cant sell the pack?

you can sell it, but it would have been better if you didnt just crop the sig to make the avvy.

his fingers look mangled, its the renders fault, or your rendering of it.
the lightning in the front looks odd
and the lightning in the background is all the same brush

render and background are completely separate, no blending, no flow, render positioned dead centre and the colour scheme is meh, could have done so much more with the colours.

read surfs handbook
http://forum.toribash.com/showthread.php?t=241636

technically, you havent done much right, because youve never learned the basics and jumped right into it with basic rendering and brushwork.

Thanks Ben, the next one will have a brush work