Very interesting and very cool as a tattoo design.
As a logo, not so much.
I think it needs to read PLN in the middle?
It is very hard to read which is the most important thing for a logo.
That and it should be easy to remember, stick in your head.
There are a couple of things you can do:
Work with two distinctive colours to make the PLN stand out more.
Lose the bevel and emboss, it is very ugly and brings your entire piece down.
Simplify the logo a little bit. Simple is better!
Lose the dark grey lines, they are useless.
Don't make the L go around the logo, cut it off.
If you still want a line around it, do it but don't attach it to the L.
Again, it's an interesting design. Just not a logo.
If you follow those little steps it will be a nice logo.
5 minute example:
I'm sorry, I don't know how the spoiler tags work..
To make it perfect (for me):
Increase the size of the 'bulge' of the P.
Simplify the outer lines (removes the bulges).
Simplify the P and the N (remove the bulges).
Improve the foot of the L.
I hope this helped and I hope you value the time I put into this to help you.
Last edited by AlphasoniK; Feb 21, 2013 at 09:43 PM.
