Toribash
Original Post
[music] Trembol - Witchslayer

This is my music, made with FL Studio 10 + VSTs
Hope you like it, you could also leave some constructive feedback.
okay that sound you have is incredibly annoying, and i hear no sub bass and it's really generic NI massive stuff

your mix is non-existent, and everything is muddy and stuck together

there's no melody and the song has no real music structure

i'm sorry man but please learn some music theory

2/10
shmevin eats smegma
It's been a while.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cIwTkAxwBpM
I've improved quite a lot, this track is over 3 months old and I've got some sick tracks going.
Not to mention that I collaborated with quite a famous guy as well,
Soulero >>> https://soundcloud.com/souleromusic/...-ft-coma-all-i
This was 7 months ago. I did this just to update this haha. The mixdown on Burst In could be better, but i've done a big improvement imo.[/B]
I like the song as a whole, but I think it needs just a pinch more of originality, it starts to sound a little bit like skrillex, which is cool and all, but not very original, for instance when the bass drops and that new beat enters it kind of sounds like something you would hear in every average dubstep song, otherwise it's great, 8.5/10.