CnC please/etc.

Alright, here goes.

As usual your background fits well with the piece.

Your blur/sharpen/focal is quite bad in this one, to be honest. What the hell is going on in here?
I don't know where to look. The shoulder looks way too sharp and so does the arm. The pointy thing on the shoulder is blurry, how is that possible? The front leg is also more blurry than the back leg and his weapon arm thingy is unclear. The head is also too sharp but that's because you blurred the rest so much.

I find the colours quite bland as well, it could've used a red or blue stream of light to spice it up.

It's... Messy.
To be honest it seems rushed.

You can do way better ;]

Hit the nail on the head with all your CnC. Thanks!

I'll attempt to make something better than my last one on my next attempt.

If I read my post it seems quite angry, that is not how it's supposed to be.
Read it in a calm voice, haha.

Looking forward to it, Hyde!

It's fine, I fully agree with you on it. It was a bit rushed, my first attempt at it didn't really pan out too well cause i'm awful at drawing.

The original one was supposed to be:


Interesting concept but I couldn't quite pull it off.

I like that one, the colours work very well, especially the butterfly.
Not sure about the border, though.

I made something these last 15 minutes to show you a bit about colours:



Just small streaks of different colours could make something interesting.
This is a crappy piece but the different colours give it some life.

I also tried to show you some interesting blurring and smudging.

Original: http://www.renders-graphiques.fr/ima...LeeArtsign.png

EDIT:
Ah, did you draw the alien?
If so it's an entirely different story and then I gave improper CnC..

No, I drew the border of the window on the other one. I suck at drawing, hence why it looks bad.