reminds me of alphas heart piece
http://www4.picturepush.com/photo/a/...mg/6957377.png
no one really got that either
technique wise, i think a few simple modifications would have made it much better
making the black area a chasm, rather than an orb, would have made for simpler and more effective depth. the white/lighter parts could just have been floating.
i like your attempt at creating depth, with blurring the foreground, unorthadox and effective, although still quite rough and blatant, being a bit more subtle with it, maybe making several layers, and making the change into the midground more gradual would have felt more natural.
creatively, yeah youve given us motivation, but i dont really feel it. you did it like i did my art projects in school, made something and thought of something cool to say about it, then finished it off.
its there, but it doesnt really matter. in the end you did it for practise, for fun or just because.
the motivation doesnt affect how i look at the piece, doesnt matter though, it doesnt have to.
i would take ezeths advice and try do something more figurative, work on some technique