Liked the video, the wobbling camera in the beginning got annoying, nice CC and shaders, the pure black shader with swexx's old set looked kind of weird. Didn't like it. That's about it.
8/10

I'll be sure to keep it still so you can't see anything xd
and swexx isn't in this video

but thank you, i'll work on my shit, rushed freecam

Hmm, if I was in it I would've liked it more, but it was nice, nice shaders, I liked the whole thing. I agree with ie the wobblin camera was annoying but everything else was good.

9/10, 10/10 if I was in it

no

No swexx's old set, the ninja at around 1:15 its naturally dark, and yes the freecam had a kinda of rushed feeling to it. It is a nice work tho :3

Oh, that's not even in my part. but thanks i appreciate your cnc

That is PR0NE.

I would have enjoyed maybe cleaner shaders, maybe something like that pinkish shader used in the crankdismuthafuckaupadslkaskldjasd;a video.

good sync and cc doe

bad/10

Why hello there.

Oh man, oh man. Kolorz, what have you done friend?

On Tyzi's part, there could have been room for improvement but it's nice enough as it is. The screen pumps at the beginning were a little too overdone, maybe more 'eased' keyframes would've looked better. I learned that from doing Pivot - I'm retarded.
Sync was just the right amount IMO. Maybe someone will disagree but you don't see me caring around here. The color correction after the first few replays was a tad too bright, but maybe my eyes are just cowards. Hey, I saw shader transitions! My life just got infinitely times better. Again, people need to do this more often. Fading in and out doesn't do it, folks. Maybe get creative transitions if working with shaders is hard for you. At some parts, I felt like the speed ups were too intense and slow downs weren't smooth enough, so it just looked very harsh.

Next time, you could do this. It helps, trust me! It gradually builds up speed and also gradually slows down so it's all going like butter.


But hey, you kept a really nice atmosphere during the whole part! Nice job.


I'm not gonna lie. At first, I didn't even notice the transition between the two parts until I compared the styles. I guess that's a plus too, we don't want a huge ass difference from your part to Kolorz's.

On Kolorz's part, not quite sure about 1:05 - 1:06. The cut clip doesn't seem to have CC applied. This might be an error on your part, but if it was intentionally put there then please refrain from using it anymore. Sync was weaker than on Tyzi's part but it definitely wasn't bad. CC was okay too. Although that dark shader is making PR0NE impossible to differentiate from the background. I was really expecting more seconds from your part. I mean, don't get me wrong here. I'm not a long-video hungry person. But compared to Tyzi's part again, yours was waaay shorter. Didn't look pleasing. And come on Kolorz! One week for 30 seconds?


All in all, good collaboration you two. I thoroughly enjoyed the final outcome.

I'm just gonna say what I think wasn't already said, and I'm probably too lazy to read Humpers
post so I apologize if I repeat what he said.
First of all its a collab, its never gonna be perfect, everyone has their own way of editing but in all
sparkly eyed happiness, there wasn't too much contrast between the two edits
concerning rhythm and color correction.
What I really liked was some of the transitions and pan/cropping at the beginning on
Tyzis part.
Tizy you have been editing tb vids much longer then I have and I hope you wont stop doing it for twice as that.
As for Kolorzs part, it was a bit bland, it had good color corrections, and
in one small clip, you probably missed color correcting it there or something (1:05).
Kolorz, you can obviously do a really good job on a video but it seems like you rush
it just to get it off your back.
It wasn't a bad collaboration in any way, I wished it could have been finished but hey.
I'm not gonna rate the video, but if I did, I would rate it 8+/10