Don't forget to include in the first post the program used for creating.
It seems like not only your video was inspired by the "arrakis motion", but also by sly's stuff. Also, your logo seemed to be heavily influenced by his logo as well.
I don't understand why do people try to copy sly so desperately nowadays... I mean, sure, his videos are better than most of the other toribash videos, but it doesn't mean that everyone should ditch creativity and make every single video look almost the same.
Aside from the lack of imagination and/or innovation, the video itself is not bad. Quite good, actually.