As I've already said on Skype, it's way to dark. Next time go with something other than studio or change the cc to actually show the characters. I like how you didn't follow the usual Toribash video formula. The trapcode particular disappear was to rough, and as I said already I can teach you how to do an actual flame instead of little boxes. gj no re.

first dark video I've seen that didn't annoy me too bad, personally thought that was the whole theme of the video

freecam was alright. too close on some parts, not close enough on others imo
love this part, though

raytracing is cool

effects were super cool and felt pretty new

your 3 months of work didn't go to waste, gj

still a chump, tho

I really like this one
I agree with Pwr with the to dark part but who cares
Like omg those particle disappear thingys was cool as fuck gj
I got really excited when I saw that it said replays by me and internet but I can't seem to find a replay by me in this vid, maybe you made a mistake with adding my name or I'm just blind. All I see is jisse and internets sexy replays.

if you say it took 3 months, I'd expect it to be much better, colourful and longer than the video you produced, i saw a shader change that ABSOLUTELY makes NO SENSE.

You need to put things in the video that make sense, a Tori mirroring two images ABSOLUTELY makes NOSENSE.

I can't help but feel the video looks a bit choppy

FUCK I MEANT TO PUT JISSE, MY BAD


That sounds so much like Tyzi.
I started this 3 months ago, that doesn't mean I edited everyday. I do happen to have a life outside of the internet.
Explain what you mean by "better", better could mean anything from the video was complete shit to the sync was off for 0.39 seconds at one part. Vids don't have to be long or colorful to be good, people who have it in their head that colorful things and long things are better are annoying, there's different styles of editing. I put the shader change there as style purposes, I don't happen to see anyone else complaining about it. The tori mirroring makes perfect sense, it's there for style, much the same way people use cinematics in other videos, it doesn't necessarily always have action in it, it's meant to set a mood.

I know that one of the clips is choppy at one point, and has pretty bad edges, but that's due to the shader/set combo which just did that and the fact that it slowed down fairly fast.

This was good until I heard the lyrics