So, heres something i made.


Program(s): Sony Vegas 12
Music: Knife party - Centipede

So yeah, i tried adding a bit flow and failed CnC is welcome.

yeah, pretty okay.
The cc is very simple and bright.
The song is very overused. Transitions are good.
I you keep practicing you will be good! 7/10

i dont like how it's red

I used the red because i think it looks good with brutal dubstep drops.

Gotta ease out your pan crop

It's way too stiff and ugly

Those "flashes" went on way too long and it hurt my eyes

the song is god awful

"jellybean"
WAPWAWAWABUABWAUWBAUWABUWBA

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=r2wyWPBRfxY
This is how I see your movie. Please tell me that was a joke.

So you're comparing my little, horrible edit to a montage parody?

And no, that wasn't a joke/parody, i put effort in that little thing you just watched.

So, what's so bad in this edit? Don't just say everything, but point out some things and explain how i could improve them.


Waiting for your reply.

I put effort in taking a morning dump and I can assure you it's not that little. Is that art?


If you can't understand why I posted this any further explanation would be waste of my time. You probably can't understand how "normal" person sees your MLG 420 NOSCOPE SMOKEWEEDEVERYDAY MONTAGE.


Overall style used by retarded 13 years old kids playing call of duty? Terrible music, eye ripping epilepsy flashes, terribad red colour? It's not smooth and hurts my eyes. I would be fucking happy to have epilepsy right now because I could fall from my chair and die forgetting about how my eyes and ears got cancer.

It's just bad. I can't find place for constructive criticism.

i know absolutely nothing about Fps edits like cod and battlefield and crap like that, but the flashy almost gave me a seizure, and the colors were kinda boring, i felt like i was wearing tinted sun glasses. Everything else was ok i guess i like the sync, but the shots didn't feel powerful enough, like use your editing to connect to the viewers on a physical level the shots were kinda anti climactic, like i was like here we go! Heres the money shot! (/+o+)/ then i hear this weak little pshoom sound. It needed more bass in that shot, makes it feel more epic goooood job though. keep it up