Now, i know it's very plain, symmetrical, and frankly not that entertaining, but i wanted to do this.

Relevant setting changes from default:starting distance is 70 rather than
100. no mods used.

i appreciate any feedback given.

Edit: i added a better, faster version of the move, but i left the origanal up because i want the most feedback i can get on this.

It's a solid dismemberment, but it's so symetrical. You have to think outside of that kind of movement. I'm sure that you have what it takes. And it's cool you didn't use any grabs for that. Get crazy on it. I've come up with some odd things You can do a search on my replays if you want some ideas. Or just look at the rest of the multitude of replays on here for inspiration.

You seem to be pretty new here, so I won't rate you on a regular scale. I'm happy not all the newbies have to go click happy on the hands, but it's really symmetrical. You also seemed to repetetively thrust into Uke, which was sorta weird. Go online, join a few matches. Watch some of the moves, learn from them. Otherwise, good no grab start!

I've been online some, before i made this, the only symmetrical things i do online are the nub-clap which i do just for fun, but in single player i can't seem to do non-symmetrical stuff....