Hey!
This is my first video. It's still a WiP, and I was thinking that some advice on editing and keyframing wouldn't hurt anyone.
I experimented a bit and tried doing some screen pumps and color correction, but it loos weird.
The shaky camera from 00:07 to 00:10 was unnecessary plus in keyframing, move your camera around not just sideways, zoom it out if possible so you could see the whole tori moving. Yeah, screenpumps were sync but dont exaggerate it. 6/10
Why is there random black at the end with the song? Did you really like the song to put in a few extra seconds of it.
I didn't know how to stop the song at the point where the video ends without having to put it again the next time I open Sony Vegas, so I just did that.
And if you're going to comment, please do it constructively and not just to complain.
Learn to keyframe, datskip made an editing tutorial so you should read that before making your next video. Almost everything you need to do is in there, but if you want personal help you're welcome to ask me or anybody else willing to