Toribash
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[VID] My First Edit
Hey!
This is my first video. It's still a WiP, and I was thinking that some advice on editing and keyframing wouldn't hurt anyone.
I experimented a bit and tried doing some screen pumps and color correction, but it loos weird.

Apart from that, how do I avoid copyright?



Used Sony Vegas Pro 13, Toribash and Fraps

Parkour • Spar • Skating
The shaky camera from 00:07 to 00:10 was unnecessary plus in keyframing, move your camera around not just sideways, zoom it out if possible so you could see the whole tori moving. Yeah, screenpumps were sync but dont exaggerate it. 6/10
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Why is there random black at the end with the song? Did you really like the song to put in a few extra seconds of it.

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Originally Posted by Princess View Post
Why is there random black at the end with the song? Did you really like the song to put in a few extra seconds of it.

I didn't know how to stop the song at the point where the video ends without having to put it again the next time I open Sony Vegas, so I just did that.

And if you're going to comment, please do it constructively and not just to complain.

Parkour • Spar • Skating
try dragging on the track (not the blank space) and you get those crop thingies so you can put one end at the start and the other on the video ending.

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That little "Game" Icon.

Also the way you move the camera is weird. But the timing you do 'zoom in-zoom out' the camera is just fit the song well. Nice one for a first edit.
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Learn to keyframe, datskip made an editing tutorial so you should read that before making your next video. Almost everything you need to do is in there, but if you want personal help you're welcome to ask me or anybody else willing to
Do /opt hud 0
to get rid of the hud that was showed in this video. If all of it does not disappear then press "esc" two times.
Thanks to everyone that gave me useful advice, I'll try to incorporate it in the next clip or the next part of the clip!

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