The spinning H in the background looks 2D. If you plan on keeping it 2D, I'd get rid of the fade and make it appear from its side. If not, I'd make it 3D.
It doesn't function particularly well as an intro. How does this intro transition into the following video? It's just a sudden ending without any fade or solid colour for keying out. I would advise doing a basic transition at the end so it can smoothly go into the video that follows it.
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use after effects or something like that, i googled Mineimator and it looks like the thing that causes all shitty mc intros or all shitty intros in general
Okay, first off, i wanna say, the thing in the back didnt look too good, and the way it moved looked awkward, the sync with the text was laggy, try to add more things :P like my first intro that i made for a friend: So, alright, :P