I liked by how it went with the beat quite nicely.
but, what game was this? also, I didn't see the reason for the transitions between the shot, then the dead guy, then the shot again. in which this was also interrupted by wording.
why did you need to use a fancy font for your placeholders
anyway effect was kinda cool i guess
transitions would have been smoothif there was actually anything to transition to
i think you've gotten really good, but i don't think i can ever offer anything to say except that your choice of music is really limiting the "wow this is cool" factor.. i dare you to try to use something else. could be just as slow and quiet, but something with more sound to it, similar to kasull