That beginning filter was a little hard on the eyes, the blue one, but the rest of the video looked decent. Keep at it!

Thanks for the feedback

Some transitions and camera movements seemed jumpy

overlays.. eh...

the whole redish bright filter on a black tori seemed a bit odd to me

and some of the transitions seemed a bit jerky

Please include the software, and the music used.

the replays/video seemed a bit choppy and laggy try recording at a lower graphics setting or something so it doesn't seem too choppy.

Also keyframes weren't that good try placing keyframes 50 frames apart.

Were they even keyframes? It looked like you just went into freecam and recorded.

Make sure the tori doesn't go out of frame.

It's my first time using keyframes, so if you have any recommendations on how to improve I'd like to know

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IMIFQ6Vp76w

watch moops tutorial and go download expert cam.. it helps with keyframes and makes a huge difference

I don't like how you were so close to Ang, try to keyframe a little farther out, and the black border when you zoom in to the other side looked bad too, try to crop it a little more smoothly, the filter like Icarus said was a little hard to see, the first clip was very very very laggy, try using velocity if on Sony vegas, there should be a similar setting on after affects.