This is my first set and I am looking for some constructive criticism. I made this in the mac equivalent of MS Paint.



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I tried using black white and red, and I love it. You can now find this texture for auction on the market.



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I changed up the arms and added shoulders, pecs, and a chest. DO you think this looks too repetitive?

recolor to black red and white

and it will be amazing

I disagree, I really like the funky colors and attitude.
I specifically love how the head texture fits in with the rest of the tori.
The minimal aspect of the texture itself is really nice.
Good skin overall bro, well done!

I like it, it has a nice festive Mardi Gras theme.

what can i say, the design overall needs more detail
especially the legs and head and make a chest
btw. the red black white isn't bad

Black/White/Red version looks a lot better, the circles on the arms look like trash. Redo the arms with something better and add some textures to the square parts of the tori (Pecs, Chest, Stomach, groin). Has potential.

yea just as K0HTA said the arms need a proper design
i didn't mention that before because it was 6 am for me and i felt like zombie

Thank you guys for the helpful comments! I took it off the market for now. But I still want to make it better so I can eventually sell it. So what do you think of the new textures?

This turned out pretty well. For MS paint you are pretty skilled.

Can't say much about simplistic. I mean...it's simple I guess.

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Try to make some little designs here and there. Don't make it too repetitive and experiment with colors.

Effective coloring is super important for simplistic and pretty much all types of art...








*try orange and blue*