Well..its my try at a madman

so yeah...

Stiff and chunky. No rhyme or reason, looks like you started with no specific focus and went on from there.

Also, too much corpse was left to consider it a good madman.

Good first effort though. Try starting with a specific focus, then continuing from that.

I knew someone was gonna say that it was to stiff

Yes, it was a little stiff, but the last hit was nice, but it was really messy and sloppy in the middle, you just kind of flailed your hands around and got a few dms. Practice helps alot.

ant say much more than these guys. i CAN add my own two cents to the "tip" jar(pun intended). what i saw was ordinary. make it different. look at all the good and bad replays on this forum, and set yourself apart from that.

My first madman was a fail..it looked coool but was fail Dt was set to 50 :3

Its not hard foreseeing someone saying that its stiff if it is stiff. It really was stiff and pretty casual too. Need more DMs to be a madman.