Mang thing is gross.
Quick Suggestions:
-give the top bone plate thing some texture and form(it'll help hide the seam I bet)
-darken the shadows where the bone plate connects with the ridge for depth(the thin line outlining the ridge is too graphic and cartoony for the style)
-pop out some highlights on the bone ridge
-I'm not sure how the front of the boneplate connects with the flesh of the face because of those midtones
this things going to be sicknasty when done. It looks all Resident Evil samurai. Nice work.