Comment and Rate plz
http://img32.imageshack.us/img32/196...osionphoto.jpg

The picture is big that's why I linked it

i hate it.

dosent look like the people are flying away (some look like they are flying to him)

work on your C/P skills

what the heck is he doing in the middle

and why is there a exlosion back there?

2/10 its poo but i must give some credit for more than one tori

Looks like disproportiones toris flying around an explosion caused by i dont know what. Not very good effects uses either. 1/10.

because he's supposed to do some mental thing that will cause the explosion,and their are some tori's that are flying away and some that are hitting the ground,their ghosts leads the way

It's too cluttered and busy. But great ideas and decently done, Just have to clean it up and present your idea more clearly.

Copy and paste: Big no. Use constant different images.

This has to has Tags, I was nice and added them for you.

Next time this will be closed instantly.

Oops,sorry I forgot,won't happen again
Update:http://img32.imageshack.us/img32/196...osionphoto.jpg

you should get rid of the flying tori's make some sort of ground rubble like a track on the ground leading from tori to the explosion as if hes projected a "mental" power to cause an explosion some distance away from him.

good idea but the flying to tori's come from effect of the explosion,they were inside the building when it was exploded

here's an anicdote to my entry so I can make everything clear:
Once upon a time lived a extraordinary hero that had the special power to explode anything he would think of with his mind.One day a spy called nuthug informed this superhero that 3 scientists called hampa, amb and evil were planning to create a chemical formula that will disable his special powers and leave him weak so the superhero rushes to the lab and uses his mental powers to explode the lab and leaving all of the scientists dead