share ur thoughts

DM.kick2=first splitkick

4.dm.in.a.row=despite the name, first time i had 5 consectutive dms (some not very important parts)

my.first.headkick=well...

ITS RAY=first time i totally unleashed on somebody for calling me raya (yes he learned his lesson and i hope u guys learn something from here too)

blackbelt beat= first time i beat a blackbelt

Ill go through these step by step.:

DM.kick2:
Not very impressive. Stiff, slow and really simple. Try to relax more, take your 500 frames to build momentum, that makes it look faster and more complex.

4dm.in.a.row.3
Grabby, messy, slow and stiff. Be sure to make the first hit at least ungrabbed, then grab IF you need to. Let go whenever you can. Also, if you grab and contract both elbows, sure, you'll dismember something, but it gets a bit messy. And ofcourse, relax more and move faster.

my.first.headkick
Pretty nice, apart from the grab.

IT RAY
It's really not cool to show use twinsword replays or any other instagib mod. What you did was landing on someone with your foot who failed in hitting your leg there, that says enough 'bout that person. Not impressed

blackbelt beat
You were about to get owned, but he forgot to extend his knee instead of hold. Well, congratulations, but this black belt made a pretty fatal mistake at -30 grav. Just because he is a blackbelt doesn't mean he's hard to beat.

That's abut it.
I'm really sorry if this looks like I'm bullying you, I'm not, I'm just trying to help you get better.

no thats wat i want critiscm

good, I'll be waiting for your next replays, and I'll see if they improved ;)

Well, meamme said it all.

Just keep practicing

well again these are my firsts ive made many more and are about to upload the newest right now

here are my best kicks i know they are stiff but i still dont have the momentum down yet so if i relaxed i would go off balancs

sry for the doublpost but i just finished 2 replays
here i tried my best at editing my first head kick into a boomhit

i like boomhit.attempt.2
the rest was stiff like u said ;)
keep on trying dude

Let's do what I did before on this thread again shall we?

Running.kick.4
It doesn't require momentum or skill to relax, just look closely at the ghost to see what'll be happening. Relax is just as easy as hold when you just do that. And don't grab for that long without anything happening.

running.kick.5
Same as above. Just practise.

boomhit.attempt.1
Well done, you gained momentum without grabbing. And you were relax. I sense improvement.

boomhit.attempt.2
Even better than 1, but technically just the same. Now go aim it better. I got an example of how you could boom him. You see how I contracted my wrist? It helps a lot. And I aimed for the space between head and pecs and got a 4dm Boom out of it.


That's it for now. I saw that you improved. A lot. Keep at it.