HTOTM: FUSION
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Practice Makes Perfect: Corey's Replay Thread
Hello everybody, this is going to be my permanent replay thread, in which i will post replays that you can rate comment on and possibly even improve if you would like. Please refrain from posting your own replays here, i don't want your replays here unless they are edits of mine.

This thread is to help me improve my replays with comments from you guys. If you have the time to watch the replay, you have time to post, even if it's just a "Nice work". I want all the feedback i can get.

I've also cleared my replay folder, shifting them all to a new folder so all the ones i save now will be recent.

Here i will start with my first two, and i'll get to work on more :]
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M-Easy Jump Cap.rpl (85.3 KB, 34 views)
1st: pretty slow, but i know it should be like that because in the title says "beautiful" and you make it slow to fit the title, also is not an easy split from that side, but it needs more.

7/10

2nd: pretty relaxed, again, needs more, and i didn't really like the decap ;|

6/10

overall: you need more power 7/10
Last edited by Gugu; Oct 2, 2009 at 01:38 AM.
For the first one, if you were aiming for slow, amazing 10/10

If you weren't, meh. 4/10
T1cux: clan have eggs.
Sorry, nathan, but, i have to disagree with you, first one would be better if it was a split-cap or at least do a little bit more dismemberments
Cheers guys. You guys can try improve it if you would like? I'm fine with it. I hope you can make it better.

Here's a new one, it's faster, and stronger.
Attached Files
M-Hows This One Guys.rpl (87.4 KB, 27 views)
Last edited by Corey; Oct 2, 2009 at 03:19 AM.
Now, that was actually a good kick, yeah, you could be more relaxed at the start, but i was wanting to see something like this from you

7/10