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Decapitations, Splits, Dismemberments and a whole lotta' blood
Hello everyone,

I have finished some replays and thought I would share some of them with you.

Rate out of 10, tell me what could be improved and what you liked/disliked on any of them.

Here they are;
Attached Files
() Frantic.rpl (185.6 KB, 9 views)
() Helpless 1.rpl (134.5 KB, 10 views)
() Jump Heel Decap 1.rpl (101.0 KB, 10 views)
() St.Anger.rpl (165.1 KB, 8 views)
()Cyanide (2).rpl (120.8 KB, 7 views)
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ill take a look at them

honestly the helpless replay sucked

other ones 7/10

madmaning iusnt the only good replays u should try some clean relax all decaps and punch decaps those get around 7/10 rankings
Last edited by Blah; Oct 3, 2009 at 09:56 PM.
Okay the helpless replay sucked because there wasn't much dismember cept' from the arm? I posted it simply because of the blow to the head which in my opinion, thought looked cool. If you think it sucked, your opinion. I respect it.

Also the reason why I madman all the time is because dismemberments and decapitations is what I like. More dismemberment, more blood = more fun imo

About relaxing:

I always try to relax as much as I can but just because it's not all relax it instantly makes it 7/10?

Thanks for looking at them, appreciate your response and the time it took for you to take a look at them.
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ohai, time to make a comment.

agh, i hate commenting on replays like these because, regardless of what i would normally say, madmen are definitly not my style, and i feel that whenever i rate them im always to harsh, simply for the fact that "its not my thing".

alright, il start with the first one. eh, the open was nice, although with alittle tweaking im sure you could have gotten a more significent dismember out of it say, a split or a decap. the split i thought was pretty nice, although you left it very noticable that you had tryed to get a crotch boom. the decap i didint like, it was alittle grabby for my taste. il give this 7/10

helpless: this replay dissapoints me because i know that if you would have spent more time on it you could have gotten a nice decap, which would have made this one of my favorite replays of this bunch. 4/10, the fact that you chased over to uke afterwords for a small dm was kind of nice.

jump heel decap: this is definitly my favorite replay you posted, very quick and stylish, 8/10.

st.anger was eh, too grabby, all the dismembers seemed rushed and you appeared to struggle to much for them. 6/10.


cyanide was ok as far as grab and dms, but it was very messy, way to much close contact with uke. 7/10.


over all, i say that, considering how new you are to single player replays, these are an ok start.
i think you just need to ease abit on the grab and work on getting dms and leave less time inbetween each.
as of this batch i give you a 7/10, which is a good score considering these are some of your first replays posted.
oh yeah
Thank you bishop1, I will take your advice into mind and try not to be a bit too grabby on the replays.

I needed comments that tell me what I need to improve on, and your's did it.
I do not care if it's harsh response, just that if it helps me to think about what I can do better, what I shouldn't do in my replays, etc etc.
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