Toribash
Not bad, I actually like it.

As for improvement, try more occlusion, it'll make it look even better. Take for instance the head, in the front there's a bit that just looks out of place between the eyes, try adding some shadow on the edges to make it stand out more. It doesn't really fit in like this. The shading's also a bit too strong on some parts, the thick black shading looks pretty bad in some cases, it's better to stick to softer shading when you work like that.
Other than that, this is a pretty sweet set, reminds me of my style
agreed maple, it does look somewhat like the stuff youve done in the past.
xept from what i can see, they way he did it was quite different.

what i like most about this set, is that the techniques used and the style of the set are quite generic, but because of the way you used colour, it isnt generic at all.
using shades of grey/black to create lines rather than adding definate borders and shadows. and the subtle acid details.

the only thing i could think brings the set down, is the lack of strong curves and the black in the head is a bit overwelming

THIS is a good example of what alot of people are calling "tribal" nowadays.
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