hey i did this plz commment i can fix the hands and foots dont worry.what do you think.
Pic:
Not colored:



Colored:

Unpropartional, black and white, boring.

Its My "First" Cant You Read?

I know its your first.

But you need to learn to take criticism, there is good and bad sides to it.

Saying that this is your 1st picture doesn't mean you will get comments like:
"Ohh pretty nice for your 1st one"

Most people do not care whether it's your 1st picture or not.

Personally I always liked this type of pictures. This one looks like made in MS Paint. Maybe get a reference picture, use pentool for nicer lines. Your picture looks like a sketch. I am sure you could draw it better if you took your time and concentrate on drawing. 3/10 from me.

I am looking forawrt to see some more pics.
Thanks,
~Luke

I would say:
bad for ur first try!
You can make it better, but keep that style ;)
4/10

I think he did it in Gimp... You can see some "blurred spots"

anyway heres another image colored.Thanks everyone and i wish i get better.and yes its made in gimp.

Ok, *sigh*

Try to take more detailed and precise measurements and lines. The hands and feet are just sad.
You most take time and try harder on the little things. And try to get proportions right it is obviously just a waste of time for you making this.
If you want to improve, Try harder and be smarter on each and every line. better luck next time.