So yeah heres my try at a madman.
C&C please. first madman etc.

symetrical, grab on every dm, and you struggled too much for the decap.
Considering its your first you are off to a good start, just try to grab less, relax more, and Use the E button to edit out all the struggling.

Thanks bro. And yeah i'm trying to get more relaxed. like i have edited nuthugs 720 kick or what ever it is. just by using his start move. and done some pretty sick things. but yeah im trying to get my relax moves better.

also use all your joints.
all you used was your arms almost the whole way through. Take your time on your Replays, You have forever to make them.

I feel so happy. a spam bot posted on my thread! and thanks for the comments guys.