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Rai's, uhh, stuff
I'm a little unimaginative right now, so no cool titles for you.

This one's two punches. The first is a split and the second is a four dm boom. Made for kickass' dual replay comp. (I'm still working on the kick one fyi.)

I'm looking for c&c and ratings so any will be appreciated.

Edit: I'll keep this thread updated.
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time to serve.rpl (118.5 KB, 22 views)
Last edited by Rai; Dec 20, 2009 at 12:11 PM.
Finished the kicking only replay now for kickass' event. C&c and ratings still appreciated for past replays too.
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That was hard to decide if it was good or bad.
I saw lots of potential in the kick but not much happened, i would of liked to see a boom along with that replay, but it looked alright as it was 8/10

If you want i can show you what i mean in an edit.
Originally Posted by noomy View Post
That was hard to decide if it was good or bad.
I saw lots of potential in the kick but not much happened, i would of liked to see a boom along with that replay, but it looked alright as it was 8/10

If you want i can show you what i mean in an edit.

Sure. I'd like that.

Any views on the first replay?
Trump bump.

This was a conditioned madman. I challenged myself to make a madman without dismembering uke's torso ((excluding pecs if you count them as part of his torso) so I had to be careful with the boom in there) in under 300 frames. I done it in 262 frames Including my long opener (50 frames.) It didn't take as long to make as I thought it would.
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monkey wrench.rpl (183.2 KB, 21 views)
Ten views and no comments? I appreciate that people are watching these but how am I meant to develop without and criticism? Even if you think my replays suck ass, still post and tell me that. I want to get better.

This one's a split.
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trogdor was a man!.rpl (54.9 KB, 13 views)
Last edited by Rai; Dec 20, 2009 at 05:50 PM. Reason: whoopas
Monkey Wrench~Too much grabing..Need more booms...A little bit slow.
Trogdor~Too simple..Just one punch and nice balance.

Replays are pretty good...But i think that you could do better.
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Originally Posted by Kristis133 View Post
Monkey Wrench~Too much grabing..Need more booms...A little bit slow.
Trogdor~Too simple..Just one punch and nice balance.

Replays are pretty good...But i think that you could do better.

It's hard to do booms when the aim is to keep uke's torso intacked. But thanks for the c&c. ;p
Originally Posted by Rai View Post
Ten views and no comments? I appreciate that people are watching these but how am I meant to develop without and criticism?

You can develop by experimenting. Use more of your joints, perhaps instead of relaxing and moving, try holding certain ones to keep balance. I get fuck all comments in my thread but I'm still 'developing'.
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