Lol, it looks like you suffer from the same disease of making uke better than you as me. You seem to pause in the action sometimes, like around 1300. There are also times that it seems you are overwhelmed by controlling 2 people at once, which results in you not moving uke or yourself at some points. You seem to do very well at keeping yourself on your feet or hands at all times, except when imitating pain shock. Also, overall, a lot of your moves look awkward.
This is all nitpicking, things to make your good replay excell. So you still get a 9/10.