4/10
You need to do some tutorials. It honestly looks like you did one side then mirrored it, also the text is a huge distraction from an art perspective. By making the font so noticeable you take away from the focal which should be your tori.
its meh at best. the hand is very outta place considering the your transparent tricep texture so it only looks like a random black box
also text is way to boring and just out there. Maybe take off the number sand choose different styles and make the colors in the text very not just white maybe white with a little hint of silver like a gradient and what not.