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[Drawing] Man showing muscels


One of my drawings I've done recently, uh.. give me some pointers. Rates/comments, the usual.

Edit: Here's a simple painting too.


Full size-http://img33.imageshack.us/i/1010933.jpg/
Last edited by Ukemonster; Jan 1, 2010 at 02:24 AM.
Belt: 9th Dan BlackBelt
Clan: Jolly Roger
It's very good, but the six pack and shoulders look awkward. The right shoulder.

The six pack looks like it's in a circle going in to the belly button, which also looks a bit oversized, and could use some detail/scribbles in it.

But still, 10/10, because even though some of it looks awkward, that is the talent of a professional artist shown right thar.
T1cux: clan have eggs.
I see your point now that I look at it that way. Thanks, I'll be updating this post or make new ones for my upcoming drawings/paintings.
Belt: 9th Dan BlackBelt
Clan: Jolly Roger
Some irregularities, but still 9/10

Some body parts look un-proportional, and the left nipple seems to have disappeared entirely, not to mention that belly button is a bit awkward.
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ya 6pack=weird belly button=weird nipple=wtf? U r gewd at drawin men 7/10

I like the boat are there any seamen on it? I dont get it's like on land though or something? confusing painting.... 8/10
Originally Posted by isaac View Post
ya 6pack=weird belly button=weird nipple=wtf? U r gewd at drawin men 7/10

I like the boat are there any seamen on it? I dont get it's like on land though or something? confusing painting.... 8/10

Your right. It's an old abandon sail boat stuck in low tide. No, theres no people on it either.
Belt: 9th Dan BlackBelt
Clan: Jolly Roger
yea the shading is very good the right and left bicep are a little miss proportioned to eachother but its pretty good in general 7/10 way better than i could do
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