hi all i jsut made this madman(my first one ever) and i was wondering if somone could give me some advice/tips/a move i can do at a certain frame for him to break more ect ect lol

u will see it kinda gets hard to make em break lol
all in all rate it (first one)

Well for your first, its great at this point I don't want to spam you with huge goals, Just make sure you be more relaxed and let go of uke more it allows you to hit him more...

EDIT: rating 8/10

ok thanks for the tip
rating out of 10?

For the first. You are waay to stiff. you gotta me more relaxed dude.
Second. this is no mad man :P or i wouldnt call this a mad man.
Third. Its boring to watch, u gotta add more speed and power.

3/10

if its ok can i post a madman so u can see what i mean ?

I got some tips and an edit for you.

When a hit doesn't dismember ( or doesn't dismember enough ) edit it(press "e" ). Sometimes an ankle or abs does the trick, or moving your shoulder. Experiment with things to build up momentum.

Be more relaxed. This is not a rule, but an advice. Don't relax all and move two joints, that'll make it look lazy, but try relaxing joints you don't need. Relaxed joints work like a whip, at first the go back, but then they swing forwards. This is good for your speed. In the edit below I relaxed the ankle ( and did loads of other things ) and got a nice crotchboom.

Your first hit was pretty potent if you'd edited it well. Example v v v

Wow Meame0, just wow, I was creating a edit myself (8 dismember) and show him how a simple change in relax can increase speed and momentum to create a smooth and dangerous hit.

But yours clearly says exactly what i meant, great job man.

yea gj :P
hope he learns .