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I love it.

Just clean it up!

It doesn't look good when it's that messy, too many small thin short lines outside the art and random stuff..

Oh wait you said that YOU like it? ..you never say that about your art, it's up to the viewers!

So yeah I don't like it anymore..

Might want to fiddle with it in photoshop, no I do not mean filter rape it nor add random text that you might find clever.

I mean color, contrast, exposure and so on editing.
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Originally Posted by Freelancer View Post
I love it.

Just clean it up!

It doesn't look good when it's that messy, too many small thin short lines outside the art and random stuff..

Oh wait you said that YOU like it? ..you never say that about your art, it's up to the viewers!

So yeah I don't like it anymore..

Might want to fiddle with it in photoshop, no I do not mean filter rape it nor add random text that you might find clever.

I mean color, contrast, exposure and so on editing.


Mmmk. Will try that. Thanks.

Also, I always think my art is crap, but once a year, it should be allowed to like it.
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It looks a bit like a mech getting disassembled into basic componants and I
love the way you made most of the picture not overlap But maybe needs a background.
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Originally Posted by wiirus View Post
Mmmk. Will try that. Thanks.

Also, I always think my art is crap, but once a year, it should be allowed to like it.

xD also wrong , you should always love your art, but never tell the world that you do ^^


Here's a fast edit of it;



Chanel mixing, color stuff random clicking and threw my cat on the keyboard.
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nice wiirus.

i think that the size makes it what it is,
its not an mess and if you make it to small it isnt what it is anymore 0_o

also freelancer made it pretty cool if you make it even more brighter it looks like an big explosion, thats pretty nice.

only low quality, if you make the pic of freelancer more quality its gonna be nice

EDIT:

i see, you should make the pic of freelancer more shine less gray shade thingy.
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The mid part is the center of attention so you have to clean up the small bits that ruins the "cleanness" of the center. I would suggest putting a lightsource that lights up the middle more than it lights up the sides, since the sides are just a mess of small bits anyways.

Adding some depth of field would be nice.
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