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[SET]WIP Neptune/Demon Abstract Ninja Set
Ill post some better Screens tomorrow
little something I managed to do in about 30-40 minutes
Rate , C&C please
if your interested in buying or anything when im done post/PM.
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Last edited by Mrama; Mar 10, 2010 at 02:07 PM.
"A study of the history of opinion is a necessary preliminary to the emancipation of the mind" - John Maynard Keynes
It's got some nice aspects to it, but it's not up to your usual standards. It lacks a nice flow and uniqueness that your heads usually have. There's something off about it, but I can't really place it.
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Originally Posted by Nathan
It's got some nice aspects to it, but it's not up to your usual standards. It lacks a nice flow and uniqueness that your heads usually have. There's something off about it, but I can't really place it.
ehhh its been a while I'm a bit rusty I guess ill make sure to make it up to my "standard" on my next set, but I think maybe the "flow" portion of your comment is incorrect hopefully I will justify that when I show you a correct screenshot.
"A study of the history of opinion is a necessary preliminary to the emancipation of the mind" - John Maynard Keynes
I like it. Solid colours, smooth gradients and simple designs fit the toribash character best IMO. The face also has nice expression. Overall it's very nice.
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No requests please
It's nice but hard to comment on it so far. Here's some things I can say though.
The eyes need a reflection of some sort. The legs currently are large vectorish shapes but on the head it looks almost like brush strokes(the blue things). I think you should make them resemble each other more by either taking out the thinner shapes or adding them into the legs and overall body. Another thing you could do would be to take out anything around the mouth area that might look like a mouth, if you didn't want a mouth... (was that confusing?) I really have no idea though because I have a very limited view of the set currently :P
I really like the simplicity though and how you can get intricate in your sets without making things seem too cluttered. I'm sure it'll look great when you finish because you're off to a great start color and design-wise. Looks nothing like a ninja in my opinion though lol
The eyes need a reflection of some sort. The legs currently are large vectorish shapes but on the head it looks almost like brush strokes(the blue things). I think you should make them resemble each other more by either taking out the thinner shapes or adding them into the legs and overall body. Another thing you could do would be to take out anything around the mouth area that might look like a mouth, if you didn't want a mouth... (was that confusing?) I really have no idea though because I have a very limited view of the set currently :P
I really like the simplicity though and how you can get intricate in your sets without making things seem too cluttered. I'm sure it'll look great when you finish because you're off to a great start color and design-wise. Looks nothing like a ninja in my opinion though lol
