C&C appreciated.

You can do ALOT better.
Try using C4D to create something, use your imagination.

Detail is a bit..TOO sketchy..

But Its a comic, C4D is for them 3d models, Which is what i also work with. As you can see, I'm trying something new.

Also, Yes, I know the "White" pixels are there, And im planning on leaving em there, Simplicity is sometimes what makes art a masterpiece.

I woudl say this could have being done a bit more smoother , your avvy is a bitty example of making a smooth comic .

Try doing it in paint from windows 7 or photoshop or gimp .

And always try to make the colours soft too :3.

Much to sketchy like Tommeh said.
Maybe more of a plot olol.
But i lol'd it's ok 7/10

White pixels isn't a part of simplicity.

If you want to do simplicity, go clean, sharp clean lines.
Quite the opposite of what you did :B

Also, I don't get it?

Keep practicing, you'll get better ;)

-makes no sense
-not funny
-poorly drawn
-probably drawn in a matter of seconds

Let me steal a little emote from Facepunch here.



I can't really say anything else, almost all has been said.

Could definitely be better, seeing how well you work with art.

3/10

When you plan on bucket filling stuff, don't use antialiasing or do it in another layer.
Also, didn't really make sense.
Try maybe stroking your lines with a pentool, too.

4/10