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Replay-O-Matic
Replay-O-Matic


Okay, this is where all my SP replays will go, and I will keep adding them as I go along.

C&C is appreciated, I like to learn from mistakes.



I have just started gymnastic styles in Toribash, tell me how I do, I prefer Tet's style.
Attached Files
Updated quickie.rpl (115.3 KB, 25 views)
Velocity.rpl (118.6 KB, 19 views)
Quick snap.rpl (27.5 KB, 14 views)
Gym - Handflip.rpl (49.4 KB, 18 views)
Gym - Wallflip.rpl (40.7 KB, 17 views)
Last edited by Castra; Mar 30, 2010 at 04:23 PM.
| tom |
The were nice :3

The madmans very fluid, but try to improve the end position, they all are 9/10

and the Gym HandFli is very good :3
and the Gym WallFlip needs a end position, still nice

Look at my Signature the one that says "My Replays" and "Parkour Replays Here"

Comment them and Rate them :P
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Castra, you grab more than necessary. Your replays are messy too. Get some fluidity, grace and less grab into your future replays. The snap kick you contracted your knee the frame after your decapitating kick. It looked weak and stiff. The Gym ones were average. The handflip looked cool, but it lacked action. You just stood there after the flip. The wallflip wasn't too shabby. Unfortunately the "pose" at the end was.

You need to cut out some stiffness and grab and bring some more fluidity and grace.

Remamber, keep on practising!
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The gymnastic ones were just supposed to be gymnastic, I didn't want them to have DM's.

But yeah, I have a problem with grabbing |:

That was a nice C&C, Temp.
Cheers.
| tom |
I know the gymnastic replays were supposed to be non-DM but you could have flipped around some more after the first flip not dismember Uke. Just making a pose right after the flip made the replay look casual.

That's what I meant.

Glad to help ^^
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