Still unsure what to do with the back :/
Open for suggestions.

uhm, not sure what a zealot is, but i like it, has detail, i think you should maybe add some kind of helmit kind of thing, or like a collar, perhaps some lighter shades to the higher? idk. but i like it. keep going

some gold design

I like the gold one, maybe continue working on that.

looks nothing like a protoss...

oh you weren't going for that? then in that case, nice head. mouth is cool.

I was not going for that no :P

Looks pretty much like mix of turk and martyr.

DO not add a helmet in this

Maybe sho more of his/her hair

I don't get where you get your ideas from, but I'll say this is finished and start on a new project..