slow,grab heavy and the moves are awkward.And it couldve been nice if you added more dismembers for it and mostly around the parts where you kicked the legs you coulde also remove the other leg and i think try to minimize the grabbing
for now its a 4/10
oh can i edit this replay?
well shit
as i said
i am not a man of editing
i mostly just do stuff and leave it that way
i mean
i do a replay and it works good
but the end is mostly crap
If you get a DM, don't move on and say 'I'm happy with that'. If possible, try to get a 2 or 3DM hit.
This if you're going for destruction. If you're going more style based, it's just a case of continuous editing until you get some good smooth movements. A single, smooth dismemberment can look a lot better than a messy 3DM boomhit and vice versa.
Very stiff moves you got there bud. You need to relax more. I felt like it was a bit casual too. Interesting opener. It was kinda strange, yet it worked. One positive point, the clean decap.
Weak replay. I think you could use some practise. Keep practising and come back with another replay