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got really stiff, and stop n go after the kick. dont stop moving after the kick, it doesnt make it look any better. make attempts to land on your feet. also in my opinion kicks made with contracted hips have more flare (By that i mean the perception of power the replay put into uke). youve got potential kid, keep em coming.
5.5/10
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Originally Posted by raya
got really stiff, and stop n go after the kick. dont stop moving after the kick, it doesnt make it look any better. make attempts to land on your feet. also in my opinion kicks made with contracted hips have more flare (By that i mean the perception of power the replay put into uke). youve got potential kid, keep em coming.
5.5/10

^that
also: kick9 sux a bit at the end :/ you should add an endpose + you shouldn't hold
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Decap9- Boring, slow, and you could have done much more after the punch.

madman7- The grabrips in the replay really ruined it for me, do not grab with your hand while punching.

madman9- Failed hits, grab hits, and very very grabby.

I am being harsh on you only so you improve, you really need to stop grab punching and try to get some sort of flow to your replays.