HTOTM: FUSION
Original Post
Fast cut in half punch
Hehe... kinda basic move but i think its pretty cool.
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upgraded
just a small upgrade its a double punch now



Removed the replay ~Juhizz

Replay was not original Juhizz it was an edit to his replay .nooby
Last edited by notnoob; May 3, 2010 at 02:58 PM.
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ill be rating the most recent one:
first of all, the grab went on for too long, and i dont really like grabs with the back of the hand. also very messy, you got red alot. the flow is nearly non-existent, really stop n go. the destruction is fine. and its good youre using relax.
may seem harsh but my rating is: 3.5/10
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Originally Posted by RayA75 View Post
ill be rating the most recent one:
first of all, the grab went on for too long, and i dont really like grabs with the back of the hand. also very messy, you got red alot. the flow is nearly non-existent, really stop n go. the destruction is fine. and its good youre using relax.
may seem harsh but my rating is: 3.5/10

Well. I'm gonna comment on that one too: sure, the grab went on for too long. I tend to do that as well and when I do that my moves look like crap. However, I don't see the stop 'n' go on this one. Looks rather fluid to me. It is rather harsh to give a 3.5/10 rating. I feel a 5 would have been better for how you describe the likes and dislikes. I personally give a 7/10 because there was a lot of self-damage. It's like you're suiciding while kicking Uke's puny ass at the same. All that redness on you was really giving me the impression YOU were Uke, and it took me more than usual to find which is which (which witch is which? Haha, just thought of that one :3). Relax is good: gives a more human feel to it. So, yeah. Try not to kill yourself when beating Uke: that's the point of the game, staying alive, remember?
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Originally Posted by BlakMuffin View Post
Well. I'm gonna comment on that one too: 1) sure, the grab went on for too long. I tend to do that as well and when I do that my moves look like crap. However, 2)I don't see the stop 'n' go on this one. Looks rather fluid to me. 3)It is rather harsh to give a 3.5/10 rating. I feel a 5 would have been better for how you describe the likes and dislikes. I personally give a 7/10 because there was a lot of self-damage. It's like you're suiciding while kicking Uke's puny ass at the same. All that redness on you was really giving me the 5)impression YOU were Uke, and it took me more than usual to find which is which (which witch is which? Haha, just thought of that one :3). 6)Relax is good: gives a more human feel to it. So, yeah. Try not to kill yourself when beating Uke: that's the point of the game, staying alive, remember?

1)the grab did go on for too long and his hand raised, lowered, pushed and pulled. that sort of ruined the flow. relax doesnt make the flow, it helps you to get one.

2) like i said, the arm and it got stiff when he was in the air

3) there were reason i didnt mention:
no style
finesse
uniqueness
those three factors make the big numbers in my book

4) i like to keepreplays at face value, it helps make an unbiased review. maybe except its like a play or something that has to do with storytelling

6) correct

also when i review replays i dont automatically give a ten, then subract when i see negatives. i start from zero add when i see positives, subract when i see negatives, i stay with my original , but i say it fluctuates between 3.5 to 4. also i judge on a universal scale, so if a see the best replay ever i dont go off the scale, that would be the 10, then i worst one would be a 0 or the 1. im basically judging everyone with the best, thats the best way i see to do it.

@kui: im sorry if i do seem harsh, i just want you to know your place and then try to improve to get better, it happened to me. it helps to watch other replay maker's replays. then you will start to get a style (helps to use sambo mod it makes it more realistic) then youll staart to get fame, then if you get really good, you could make it into ormo.
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