I think it's the better of the 2 wallpapers I've posted.
Please comment, don't just say "Oh that's very good! 10/10"
please tell me what I can change, what I can do better next time, and stuff like that.

If you'd like a .xcf/.psd, PM me.

I think there is too much glow on the strokes.
You also didn't layer the strokes properly or missed some parts when you erased.

Way too much...glow:V

Wow. A little too much neon don't you think?

Fuck man over dose on the neon man, usually i use a minimal amount of it just to add a little extra flare, never base a whole wallpaper on it. The Text wasnt great, should fine a nice unique font and do something creative as for tha back ground the flow was actually ok. I like to keep my bg's minimal so its kinda my style.

Over all 6/10 not my favourite Nathan.

Advice:If you add too much of something, it looks really cheesy.

an advice and request:
LEARN TO DO DIFFERENT THINGS!!!

Too much glow/stroke, and the pentooling is really sloppy.

Agreed:l

It looks too clustered. Try to make the swirled lines thinner. I like the idea though. 8/10.