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[Head] Atrum Ocissor
New head I made in my boredom, named Atrum Ocissor (Latin for Dark Murderer).
It is 60% C/P, 10% blurring, 10% enhancing, 10% positioning, 10% color swapping (more stuff, etc).
It is currently for sale in the Art/ Textures subforum. Bid if ya want. ^_^
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its not finished.
wheres the background?

would be very nice... IF it where finished. but its not finished, so its not very nice.

just thought id put that out there.

Originally Posted by CrazyGreek View Post
It is 60% C/P, 10% blurring, 10% enhancing, 10% positioning, 10% color swapping

so basically 70% was just cutting it and putting it onto a canvas. and 30% was not doing very much else? from looking at the presentation and explanation, thats what im reading here.

i would assume enhancing would be doing things like redefining the lines on that back/side plate? touching up the spikes? things like that? i dont see very much of that done.
the blurring was done where you botched up the cut? fair enough, but there are other methods of fixxing that. otherwise i dont see where blurring would be applicable on this head.
colour swapping, again, im not sure, where?

you may want to rethink youre approach to c/p and look at how other artists do it. vermine, aerox, kungfujc etc etc.
you could even, oh i dunno, ask them for help? read what theyv said in the gata board? etc etc...

but. by all means, feel free to point out where i went wrong, c/p isnt exactly my profession.

but still, my biggest peeve is the lack of background. please do something with that. will do WONDERS for the head
Last edited by BenDover; May 25, 2010 at 12:25 AM.
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I think it looks good.

I like the fire effect. It looks like it is behind glass where it is being contained and i think that adds a very good effect to it.

I dont really understand the name of the head but i geuss that doesnt really matter now does it?

The one big thing i dont like is that there is a background color. Most c/p heads dont have a background color because they are completely filled with c/p'ed material.

This is still a good head and i think someone will buy it.


ninja'd by BenD who kind of completed my background color.
Fronts pretty clean, and not cluttered like most c/p set's. but the back some other parts, lack saver detail. Like there's nothing there. So i kinda agree with BenD, i would have finished it before you put it up for sale.
Aka jusmi.
Originally Posted by BenDover View Post
its not finished.
wheres the background?

would be very nice... IF it where finished. but its not finished, so its not very nice.

just thought id put that out there.


so basically 70% was just cutting it and putting it onto a canvas. and 30% was not doing very much else? from looking at the presentation and explanation, thats what im reading here.

i would assume enhancing would be doing things like redefining the lines on that back/side plate? touching up the spikes? things like that? i dont see very much of that done.
the blurring was done where you botched up the cut? fair enough, but there are other methods of fixxing that. otherwise i dont see where blurring would be applicable on this head.
colour swapping, again, im not sure, where?

you may want to rethink youre approach to c/p and look at how other artists do it. vermine, aerox, kungfujc etc etc.
you could even, oh i dunno, ask them for help? read what theyv said in the gata board? etc etc...

but. by all means, feel free to point out where i went wrong, c/p isnt exactly my profession.

but still, my biggest peeve is the lack of background. please do something with that. will do WONDERS for the head

I will do. I need to find a way to make what I add to the background 'blend' with the rest of the c/p parts. I appreciate the detailed advice. +rep

Originally Posted by Ecto View Post
I think it looks good.

I like the fire effect. It looks like it is behind glass where it is being contained and i think that adds a very good effect to it.

I dont really understand the name of the head but i geuss that doesnt really matter now does it?

The one big thing i dont like is that there is a background color. Most c/p heads dont have a background color because they are completely filled with c/p'ed material.

This is still a good head and i think someone will buy it.


ninja'd by BenD who kind of completed my background color.

The name is Dark Murderer. It is supposed to be a bot assassin, so I think the name fits. It's just in Latin.

Originally Posted by Doxxy View Post
Fronts pretty clean, and not cluttered like most c/p set's. but the back some other parts, lack saver detail. Like there's nothing there. So i kinda agree with BenD, i would have finished it before you put it up for sale.

Thanks, I am adding stuff as we speak, and adding a new preview within a few hours.



+rep for all the good criticism and comments.
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Originally Posted by CrazyGreek View Post
I will do. I need to find a way to make what I add to the background 'blend' with the rest of the c/p parts. I appreciate the detailed advice. +rep

Here's some advice on a background.Keep it simple to start off with,then add details from there.Therefore there is no "left over" areas to fix up.For example,make 3/4 horizontal metal bars/pieces (must be close together) going around your head in the background,then from there add details.such as: wires,more metal pieces in different shapes(for a armour effect),lights etc.Then you should have a decent background.Thats just one of the ways I do robotic head backgrounds,so yeah hope this helps.

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Sweet! I would give you +rep for helping me once more, but I can only give so much per person at a time.
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Not bad, I don't like the yellow on the top and the bottom but the back of the head and sides are pretty good.
6/10
lol the opposite of what the others said. Thanks anyway ^_^
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