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[Head] New Style - C&C appreciated
I've never done anything remotely tech- or robot- themed... So I'd appreciate any and all constructive criticism! I made it big so that the details are apparent.
Goals:
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Goals:
- Make a tech-themed head texture
- Focus more on the back than the front (I tend to devote very little time to the back)
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Last edited by HedHuntr; May 25, 2010 at 08:40 AM.
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Pretty cool, but the eye's are kinda out of place, a bit bigger and closer together, also, it's cluttered at the back, try to keep it the same around the entire head.
6.5/10
Also when you go to make the spinny, make the index to n 0, it makes the quality much better.
6.5/10
Also when you go to make the spinny, make the index to n 0, it makes the quality much better.
Aka jusmi.
Originally Posted by Doxxy
Pretty cool, but the eye's are kinda out of place, a bit bigger and closer together . . . Also when you go to make the spinny, make the index to n 0, it makes the quality much better.
Thanks, I'll try that.
Originally Posted by Doxxy
also, it's cluttered at the back, try to keep it the same around the entire head.
I figured I was over correcting a bit... I'm worried that I'll clutter the eyes too much
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Well you certainly achieved you goals!
First thing that struck me after "Wow, pretty lights" was that the eyes seemed too dull compared to everything else. Adding the same cyberlooking glow would be really fitting I think.
I like the hexes btw ^_^
First thing that struck me after "Wow, pretty lights" was that the eyes seemed too dull compared to everything else. Adding the same cyberlooking glow would be really fitting I think.
I like the hexes btw ^_^
Originally Posted by DarkJak
Well you certainly achieved you goals!
First thing that struck me after "Wow, pretty lights" was that the eyes seemed too dull compared to everything else. Adding the same cyberlooking glow would be really fitting I think.
I like the hexes btw ^_^
Thanks. I've been admiring your work for quite some time now, big fan. I updated the first post, what do you think now?
sidenote: damn 64 frame spinnys take a while to render
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