Is that supposed to be a train coming out of a tunnel?

It is quite blurred i cant see anything.

Fix it and i will give proper C&C

Ecto you Need Glasses

I View The Train The Train Is Coming 10/10 Good Work War You draw In Hand Or Use A Editor?

Photoshop and Wacom tablet.
Anyways, the edges of the train are supposed to be blurry.

Very good Art War

It looks like a brown frowny face with a lit up nose. honestly, it looks pretty awful imo.

^

I can make out what seems to be a bright light (train heading towards viewer ofc), and I can see that the viewer is in a tunnel. It doesn't look that good though, mostly because of the perspective.

You've probably based if off of a circle-ish tunnel.



But I think making it a rectangle-ish perspective would have worked better.

its darker than $#!% dude. looks a lot like something from tim burton though ^_^ 6/10

If this didn't have a title, I don't think I'd be able to tell what it is.

The intended perspective is this:

Thanks for the comments btw, even the negative ones.