So like, this was a lot less fun to make, but it is a more concrete idea.

It's a little bit too bright though.

i like the suit

Seekrit Cthulhu is serious fucking business.

10/10

Cthulhu's tentacles are more curly and stuff :3

Looks epic tho, clean it up a bit?

hey , nice one , il like the "attitude" and like gorman says , clean it up a little will be great .

I don't really know what you're going for with all of these drawings. The brush strokes are nice and defined, but the drawings themselves look like a kindergartener with a crayon drew them.

bottom of his jacket is bothering me... stretched to fit =/

and if the sketchy look was the look was the look you were going for, then you should use line direction to add depth rather than just relying on shade changes...

the use of smudging makes me think i need to get my eyes checked out, untill i look away and realise its not my eyes that are blurring, its the actual picture...

octopus seems to be suffering from a bad case of rigormortis

would be interesting to see the concept vectored, it just screams "anime" to me

Oh snap
That is so disgustingly hideous that it looks awesome and scary.
8/10

Bottom of coat kind of is a turn off.

I have to say..
this is pretty bad.

The brush strokes are nice enough, but the actual figure is pretty below basic.
I'd give this a 4/10